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Oh, man.
Still havent heard your first submission but this one...
Well, where are the jokes?
Even the retard one at the end was bad. And i'm not talking as a comedy expert, it was just painful....
You should work on your jokes. I guess you have the attitude and the balls, but being comedy something that's based on laughter... Eh...
Well i hope that with the perspective i gave you with my first post and the eventual re-judging of this new entry by Keith and Chemda, you'll be set for reinventing your comedic chops. Ok?
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