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What was it Freud said about dreams...? hm.
Anyways, at great risk of offending Danny, I offer advice. HOORAY! Unsolicited advice. From a complete stranger! Who doesn't enjoy that kind? ....
Danny, i can say the following because Keith kind of hinted at it. It is this. Your writing is really good, but the way in which you read it is odd. Your beats are off and I think Keith even mentioned something about your cadence. Please don't rush through your readings and/ or be so dismissive of your writing as to not give it its due w/ your tone. You may as well have someone else read it; if you're not going to commit to it.
Whether or not you take heed to this advice I shall continue enjoying the show as it is a good one. Please do not form a suicide pact w/ Lucas and please continue to make a very interesting show.
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