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Originally Posted by jesus
I read it all. I don't think it was funny (just my opinion) but a lot of the funninesness of stand up is in the stand up delivery so maybe it's funnier live. Kudos to you for putting it up there to be ripped apart though, I wouldn't have the balls.
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I appreciate the honesty and kudos...
I don't think it's especially funny to read either, the way i would deliver it is the only real reason i would expect people to laugh at it.. and even so, it's still very much a work in progress.. but even though the funny is not there.. my viewpoint is... so i figured it was worth posting...
again, thanks for your opinion