McNally's New Fiction Podcast

kissmisskate · 01-16-2009, 01:31 AM

Soooo good. I want Ayn to read me to sleep every night. Also, McNally, you have a real talent. Write more, have Ayn read it, and make a cd. I'll buy it.

Sparrow · 01-16-2009, 10:05 AM

I want Ayn to read everything aloud to me from now on.

Loved it. Absolutely loved it. I remember feeling all those awkward things at 12. McNally, when were you a 12 year old girl, dear?

TheArchitect · 01-16-2009, 09:09 PM

I really liked it, but I really thought he was gonna fuck the kid and get arrested for being a pedo. But the direction you took it in was good as well.

juliofromny · 01-17-2009, 06:27 PM

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Originally Posted by TheArchitect

I really liked it, but I really thought he was gonna fuck the kid and get arrested for being a pedo. But the direction you took it in was good as well.

i totally thought the same especially after he pulled off her pants. I thought it was going to be some disturbing foreshadowing. I'm glad it didn't go that route and be predictable

Babbling Bryan · 01-17-2009, 08:05 PM

I can totally see this being a short film at Sundance!
Thought about making this into a short?

I was afraid you were gonna pull a "look how deep the title is" by making the girl like the coffee at the end and it being like "She didn't like it at first and now she has grown up from this whole expierence that happened and thus she likes the coffee". I'm glad you didn't

I can haz moar?

presspirate · 01-18-2009, 09:37 AM

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Originally Posted by juliofromny

i totally thought the same especially after he pulled off her pants. I thought it was going to be some disturbing foreshadowing. I'm glad it didn't go that route and be predictable

Mr too. I was disturbed at that point and felt a little dirty, but it was great stuff. Excellent reading by Ayn. She has a great voice. Uhhh two thumbs up.

motownguy · 01-18-2009, 10:15 AM

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Originally Posted by Babbling Bryan

I can totally see this being a short film at Sundance!
Thought about making this into a short?

I was afraid you were gonna pull a "look how deep the title is" by making the girl like the coffee at the end and it being like "She didn't like it at first and now she has grown up from this whole expierence that happened and thus she likes the coffee". I'm glad you didn't

I can haz moar?

Ayces ... now get off your chilly Canadian tush and take it to the next logical step. Yes, yes ... this was great work and can be appreciated as such. Best animated short, anyone?

dismantleREPAIR · 01-19-2009, 11:35 PM

Great job McNally! The story was well done, and the fact I know an Alice similar to the one in the story was just icing on the cake. Keep up the good work and looking forward to hearing more.

Articthunder666 · 01-20-2009, 07:54 AM

i'll check it out. thanks for the share!

Ant-LOX · 01-20-2009, 09:29 AM

No thanks.

01-16-2009, 01:31 AM	#11 (permalink)
kissmisskate Member Join Date: Mar 2008 Posts: 92	Soooo good. I want Ayn to read me to sleep every night. Also, McNally, you have a real talent. Write more, have Ayn read it, and make a cd. I'll buy it.
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Sparrow Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: Georgia Posts: 5,396	I want Ayn to read everything aloud to me from now on. Loved it. Absolutely loved it. I remember feeling all those awkward things at 12. McNally, when were you a 12 year old girl, dear? Last edited by Sparrow; 01-16-2009 at 10:45 AM.
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TheArchitect Member Join Date: Jun 2007 Posts: 46	I really liked it, but I really thought he was gonna fuck the kid and get arrested for being a pedo. But the direction you took it in was good as well.
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Babbling Bryan Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: The Netherlands aka Holland! Posts: 789	I can totally see this being a short film at Sundance! Thought about making this into a short? I was afraid you were gonna pull a "look how deep the title is" by making the girl like the coffee at the end and it being like "She didn't like it at first and now she has grown up from this whole expierence that happened and thus she likes the coffee". I'm glad you didn't I can haz moar?
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dismantleREPAIR Junior Member Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: New Jersey Posts: 1	Great job McNally! The story was well done, and the fact I know an Alice similar to the one in the story was just icing on the cake. Keep up the good work and looking forward to hearing more.
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