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Old 04-07-2010, 08:28 PM   #73 (permalink)
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I'll preface this by saying that I don't always agree with Spooky. Hell, I may not even on this topic, but I just popped in here and haven't read anything yet. What I have read are the last few posts and I have to say, if you're going to call people morons, learn how to structure a coherent paragraph. See, here's what you wrote:

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Originally Posted by banger316 View Post
Yeah cause obviously in this day in age we don't have books or podcasts or oh yeah this little known device called the internet to keep ourselves informed. I know what your thinking the internet i thought it was just for porn no in fact it is a wonderful resource for scientific lay mans like myself so no the classroom is not a more up to date source for info on technology and scientific breakthroughs.
Now, here's how it should be written (especially to achieve the sarcastic tone you were trying so desperately to accomplish):

Yeah because obviously, in this day in age we don't have books, podcasts or this little known device called "the internet" to keep ourselves informed. I know what you're thinking "the internet? I thought it was just for porn!" NO! In fact, it is a wonderful resource for a scientific layman like myself. The classroom is not a more up to date source for information on technology and scientific breakthroughs.

See how easy that is when you actually have a diploma? Much to your point, the internet doesn't have to be stupid

Last edited by Station; 04-07-2010 at 08:31 PM.
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