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Old 05-18-2010, 06:22 PM   #73 (permalink)
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Originally Posted by Bucho View Post
I reckon stick to your guns mate, I think you're a pretty funny poster and I'm curious to hear a forums-based routine.

But if you're thinking of submitting for Keith's stand up show next year you need to go back and listen to the shows where they critiqued this year's submissions and pay closer attention to the critiques, so you can learn why that thread count joke of yours isn't really a joke. There might be something funny in the notion of it, but the way you have it written right now it's got a weak structure and it won't land with any force at all.
of course its not the puchline. i aint giving that away early!!! just a part i thought would make a good signature.
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