How did you like my paper?

ladysaphia · 09-21-2009, 05:39 PM

I wrote the paper on 1045.

Draconis · 09-21-2009, 05:43 PM

Err... ????

CuriousKlepto · 09-21-2009, 05:54 PM

It took me a second to realize that 1045 was the episode number. It was o'tay, no Anne Rice, but it got your point across, I guess.

Abstraction · 09-21-2009, 06:27 PM

Lose the verbosity. It doesn't make you sound smart, just like a douche. You can add in one more big, intellectual word for every year until you know how to use them well.

ladysaphia · 09-21-2009, 06:49 PM

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Originally Posted by Abstraction

Lose the verbosity. It doesn't make you sound smart, just like a douche. You can add in one more big, intellectual word for every year until you know how to use them well.

But I am a douche.

hayroob · 09-21-2009, 06:58 PM

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Originally Posted by ladysaphia

But I am a douche.

Stop it. Illiteration and unnecessary verbosity drag your writing down like dead weight.

Stop it.

ladysaphia · 09-21-2009, 07:05 PM

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Originally Posted by hayroob

Stop it. Illiteration and unnecessary verbosity drag your writing down like dead weight.

Stop it.

Kay

HumbleNarrator · 09-21-2009, 10:17 PM

agreed - but keep at it.

read more - with an eye towards authors who are efficient with their words. ie - NOT scott sigler.

hayroob · 09-21-2009, 10:19 PM

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Originally Posted by HumbleNarrator

agreed - but keep at it.

read more - with an eye towards authors who are efficient with their words. ie - NOT scott sigler.

Hey now, The FDO is good times, his stuff actually gets a lot tighter by the time it gets to print.

HumbleNarrator · 09-21-2009, 11:37 PM

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Hey now, The FDO is good times, his stuff actually gets a lot tighter by the time it gets to print.

then he should read that version for his podcast.

check that - hire someone else to read that version

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